Hello OffTopic. I’m feeling a little but bold today so I’m gonna share a poem of mine. Please have a little bit of mercy if you find it to be bad. But if you have critiques, give them to me. Here it goes...
[b][u]Short but Bittersweet[/u][/b]
I think that I might
Just try to to fall in love with you
And show you all that I say I do
Make the most of the opportune
And I can’t ever say that I love you
Because I don’t see you enough to
I try to follow you
Copy what you do
I’m a fake, but I’ve got a feeling you are too
Because I don’t know what you really do
But I’m way too afraid to even ask you
And I never do
Why?
I’m afraid of rejection
But I use the excuse and say I’m way too young for a girlfriend
Falling out of time, feelings, make it hard to find mine
Never, will I say you didn’t try
Take me, make me all you like
Fall down, and try to see the light
It didn’t work, because I didn’t try
Why?
I’m afraid of getting hurt
When I do
It takes away all my worth
Never take the time to make it work
But when I do it makes things worse
Are you getting the notion I forget my worth
But I’m trying to remember the best times
But it’s like a tale in my mind
Oh, why
My imagination messes up life
It’s not something I like
Wish I never tried, sometimes
Tragic
What describes many lifelines, not mine
Deep Thoughts
Are what you’ll find
You’ll drown
Because all I do is try
I forget why
Sometimes
[spoiler]if people like this one I might make it a series. It all depends though. [/spoiler]
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iThink [spoiler]iThink[/spoiler]
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Nice man. I can tell that's from the heart. Maybe a little rough written, but it'll get better with time
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