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Editado por karste385: 3/13/2019 7:38:50 PM
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How much “poorly timed” for the sake of character development is ok?

Writing a book, and I have two characters and one, let’s call her Melissa, is really into the other, deemed Gary. Gary is really ignorant of her romantic advances. I have an escape scene where the two are forced into an uncomfortable situation. Both these characters are pretty underdeveloped. During the escape scene, should I focus on the escape, or make it more comedic and focus on developing Gary and Melissa’s romance/relationship? FYI, this isn’t super far into the story, should I save it for later?

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